Saturday, November 7, 2009

Touture Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

They fly their hands into the air...
Cast a spell upon me to never let me die...
They throw their heads back..
And just laugh.
...
Read full text

Monica Rose
COMMENTS
Allan O 07 November 2009

I wouldn't say disgusting...i would say creative...just because you write of something tilted slightly towards the darkside of poetry it doesn't make it a bad writting...i am impressed..i enjoyed reading it and would like to see more...many of my poems and such are from the darkside...basically known as dark poetry...it's what all of us feel within at times but feel wrong about exposing it to others...great write Monica ~^..^

1 0 Reply
Close
Error Success