Near a shrine in Japan he'd swept the path
and then placed camellia blossoms there.
Or -- we had no way of knowing -- he'd swept the path
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It makes a mockery of poetry. It's drivel from the lips of vanity.
The depth is surprisingly huges if you start really to think........... about the - after all - not at all simple words you wrote. elliedaphnevanstralen dot com
Nice! Evokes that quality of Japan and Japanese culture that some of us are really drawn to.