Monday, January 13, 2003

Tour Comments

Rating: 2.7

Near a shrine in Japan he'd swept the path
and then placed camellia blossoms there.

Or -- we had no way of knowing -- he'd swept the path
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Carol Snow
COMMENTS
Michelle Claus 26 April 2014

Nice! Evokes that quality of Japan and Japanese culture that some of us are really drawn to.

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Captain Herbert Poetry 26 April 2014

smooth poem but with depth. Thank you

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K.c. Ford 26 April 2014

It makes a mockery of poetry. It's drivel from the lips of vanity.

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A Whisper And A Clamor 26 April 2012

I like this......Thank you: -)

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Ellie- Daphne 26 April 2012

The depth is surprisingly huges if you start really to think........... about the - after all - not at all simple words you wrote. elliedaphnevanstralen dot com

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Manonton Dalan 26 April 2012

he sweep it first then spread camellias

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Richard Hexem 02 April 2010

Very interesting. I enjoyed it.

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Joseph Sissens 13 March 2008

Fairly boring but fairly interesting

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