Tuesday, March 17, 2009

Tour Of A River Comments

Rating: 5.0

Its amazing I can`t see the other end
Villages, towns, bridges passed all
I am wondered who is driving you
the tour is too long!
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swagathnath rajeswari
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it would be a lovely trip if the river could take u along

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Pablo Cruise 19 March 2009

Intriguing visions from such a young mind.

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Catrina Heart 18 March 2009

a fine interesting composition...lovely poem...Thanks for sharing! ! !

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Martine Kolber 18 March 2009

Nice write, I especially like the last stanza; -) Keep writing; -) Take care, Martine

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