Sunday, May 17, 2020

Tough Roads Comments

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As a child, l often feared
To step on path that led wired.

Never was I confident
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Varsha M
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 August 2021

A poem with a great message. A well thought out write well conveyed

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 August 2021

Cont.. Yet, it is those paths that are full of holes and darkness that will shape us to become brave, determined and more knowledgeable in our life's journey.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 August 2021

This poem resonates with me. In our life's journey we always choose a path that is easy to navigate and without obstacles.

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Kostas Lagos 17 May 2020

Well constructed poem! Thanks!

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Varsha M 17 May 2020

I tried to explore more of the facets of poetry. Thank-you for admirations.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 May 2020

be happy stay indoors they will ensure 15 days quarantine more do endure why yourself bore the powers that be them adore they want you to LIVE MORE later not o die who can ensre all are born to go Varsha M (5/17/2020 7: 14: 00 AM) Good words of expression killing every hope that raises its hood. Are you still there I have made it for another fortnight. Good emotional poem of lockdown. Admirations

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Varsha M 17 May 2020

Thank-you for your admirations sir

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