Tough Love Comments

Hello again Sara, This a great poem, and you're right the world is a warzone and mindfield that must be trodden with care... and those special people in your life make it all worth living! Very nicely expressed and I can feel the joy and love you have imprinted in this for your loved one. They must be proud. Some of us have to grow up quickly and reality can be all too much to bear but in the end such love and care will pull through. I only have two things to say though... I think the title needs revising, and I think you meant it to say Through Love? Also second line in your second stanza, it should read against 'all' these demons, just two small typos there but otherwise a fine poem. Keep releasing your emotions and funnelling them to the page. Dale :)