Sunday, March 23, 2008

Tough Love And Salted Tears Of No Fear Comments

Rating: 5.0

He deals with his cancer just like he dealt
with that stupid war back in the Nam; he curses himself
for all those unfiltered cigarettes he smoked in between
lighting up the jungle with tracers so he could see to shoot
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Ivan Donn Carswell 23 March 2008

I'll have to relent and allow you a glimpse of something new - the replacement of Bukowski with Realismo Sheridanesque... Rgds, Ivan

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Thad Wilk 23 March 2008

This is a very powerful write Ted! Poignant and capturing for sure! *10plus*! ! Best Regards! Friend Thad

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William Jackson 23 March 2008

Great poem, Ted. A description of a true tough guy, a salt of the earth type.

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