Tough Love Comments

try writing your poetry with 'WORD' spell check is a wonderful thing. the red will catch misspellings and green will improve grammer. Writers write.

i liked that..very creative and good choice of words... :)

Different and the real one! ... but it is life and this is love 10+

I can definitely empathise with your love being unspoken. It is a curse that befalls many people. What we desire is within reach, but human fraility causes us to fall with arms outstretched. A simple and enjoyable poem. Well done.

a potent and straight forward poem.. it gets ur attention nice

'It seems there is, but a curse'mmmh a powerful ending, , , , , ,

Quite a deep poem, I read it twice to understand it, 10 Lynda