Wednesday, April 18, 2012

Tough Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

My father
called celery... salary,
and Valerie... Valaria.
What he called me
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Walterrean Salley 04 July 2012

Very moving. I’m sorry for your difficult childhood, Sally. Very sad about your dad, but you did what you had to do. 10

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Danny Draper 20 April 2012

This emotional poem shows strength and resilience and a language of street savvy that demonstrates a maturity beyond your years formed by your often tough experiences. And yet you still kindly reflect on your father's quirks despite his mental health issues, with a gentleness and resolve that shows great empathy and kindness even if tough love was the only true course against the growing disharmony in your life. A good and gutsy write.

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Heather Wilson 18 April 2012

You poured your heart out on this one, so much emotion, well written.

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Haverhill Suffolk England
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