gloomy whirlpools
surf me soundlessly
let by ones be by ones
our souls follow dearly
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Uhhg that was stinkin amazing! ! ! it has my favorite word in there too nostalgia
Tough epitaph speaks of an endless dream of a soul resting in peace.
'mild minarets notice nostalgias who ever be in love will never feel any grief' The idea you have incorporated in these conclusive lines is very nice. I do like it. Thanks for this beautiful work,10+
last lines are wonderful, to love is to embrace grief but the magic of love is that it gives strength to withstand grief! ! ! !