Friday, March 16, 2018

Touched By Time Comments

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Touched by Time;
They harnessed the sun.
Now, people to people,
Pay to see.
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Buxton Shippy
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 March 2018

A thought provoking poem beautifully crafted. Liked the last 3 lines of the piece. Great write.

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 March 2018

Now, people to people, Pay to see. Conquered by Greed; a poem which describes the theme in contrasts..... very well written in original tone dear poet. thank you dear.. tony

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Buxton Shippy

Buxton Shippy

Montego Bay, Jamaica
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