Sunday, November 20, 2016

Touched By Darkness In My Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

I lie in rapture and her beautiful black eyes,
Remind of dark clouds gathering in the skies
That girl in my dreams is a Raven that screams,
In the darkness a path lit by silvery moonbeams
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Ayman Parray
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 23 November 2016

An intense poem that showcases the extremities of life, the joy and sorrow of dreams. Dreams can be rapturous or can engulf one in dark clouds. Excellent Ayman!

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Nosheen Irfan 20 November 2016

An enchanting piece of writing. How beautifully you express your feelings. A perfect flow of thoughts n words. A perfect 10.

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