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Who are you to stroll into my life
With such boldness and audacity
Claiming with authority
That I am yours and this is destiny?
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Simply amazing! You've done a wonderful job putting this together.
Through this small poem, you have treated the delicate subject of a passionate love rather beautifully which is echoed in the following words: (words) ..... touch without touching / The very consciousness that makes me woman?
Incredible poem. Certainly worthy of being chosen as Poem of the Day. Congratulations!
Wow..; . Incredibly sexy......! The dance between men and women - other than just the physical - is so overwhelmingly charged and exciting.... You captured it so very well Cheryl....
Beautiful poem with a very intelligent use of words (How is it your words are able to move me beyond words...) ...
The commanding character of the hero touches the lady sans his touching her and makes her feel as a woman by consciousness!
Wow! Love this poem. It is very sensuous and sublime, I can totally identify with this poem. A great write! Thank you for sharing it. It is a favorite of mine now. Deserves a 10. RoseAnn
The double use of 'words' does not work for me. Maybe change to... How is it your rhetoric, Is able to move me beyond words
How is it your words Are able to move me beyond words and touch without touching The very consciousness that makes me woman.this is how one claims authoriatively on womanfalk when he is sure that he willd lure and draw the woman she wants.. thi is not easily done as feeling is from both sides and nothing can go wrong if it is earnest and pure one....i m moved my themes 10 read mine love..................at first sight....i miss....cry not
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7/21/2025 10:29:45 AM # 1.0.0
.....very nice...congratulations on member poem ★