Monday, February 22, 2021

Touched Comments

Rating: 4.5

In this gallery of quiet
Nobody needs to shout.
That which is worthy of notice
Can be heard,
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Ravinder Kumar Soni
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Luis Estable 23 February 2021

The first stanza succeeds as poetic expresion ans starts the poem well. I feel that the second stanza breaks the success of the first stanza and one does no follow the thought well. I wonder what that place is no need of shouts. The name gallery is just a figure of speech not a real one.

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Varsha M 22 February 2021

Discovering oneself is the greatest source of peace and strength. One who knows self knows many things. This is beautiful and insightful poetry. Thank-you sir.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 February 2021

One thing I want to know you from sir why did you delete your poems? Why did you ignore your own work? Are a loner?

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 February 2021

A beautiful poem! I felt the taste of Varsha's poetry here. She is following your style sir. Please inspire her!

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