Thursday, December 1, 2005

Touchdown Comments

Rating: 5.0

As he crosses into
the end zone
and the crowd
ejaculates in rapture,
...
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Michael Philips
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Raynette Eitel 01 December 2005

Your mind works in quirky ways. Are you from Mars, by chance? :) Funny poem with startling images. Raynette

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Uriah Hamilton 01 December 2005

Maybe I got this happy watching a tennis match, female tennis!

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Declan McHenry 01 December 2005

Excellent. Funny. Thoughtful. A money shot.

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Mary Nagy 01 December 2005

This is a funny representation of how ''in to'' sports men do seem to get. I would never have these thoughts while watching sports on t.v................never. Great poem. The last line really brings you back to reality. Nice touch. Sincerely, mary

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Michael Shepherd 01 December 2005

You have a wild and joyous offbeat imagination. Thanks for this.

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Tiyler Durden 01 December 2005

GREAT STUFF MAN WELL DONE I GIVE THIS A 10....

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