Touch - Rain's Quest Comments

A MidSummer Night's Rain Mother nature gets her act together The Cool breeze, the Strong winds Chirping Birds hurrying to their abode The green Pastures, the perky huts Vowing to be great night ahead.......... beautiful write and well thought presentation....... read mine miss i miss you, dead nughts and butterflies around... read n comment if u can

A lovely write! well penned. Liked it immensely....10

enjoyed reading.......... you have penned well in a classic manner.......

well-penned poem....................... ten

lovely piece, full of concrete imagery, appropriate rhyming, simile's and metphor's as well as a dash of the poets personality, everythinh a poem should have, very nice poem