Wednesday, July 8, 2009

Touch Of Rain Comments

Rating: 3.9

Ice is melting from the eyes of grey sky
Caressing the raw flesh over my frail chest
This rain has made me decree
Without any fear of being mistaken
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Dr Kamran Haider Bukhari
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Sandra Fowler 12 July 2009

You are in tune with the rain. Superb last line. Kind regards, Sandra

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Indira Babbellapati 12 July 2009

i've a fascination for rain...and my poetry made me realise it as all i wrote on rain came out unknown to me...the last line is just beautiful!

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a beautiful poem with rainy touch...

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