Friday, November 6, 2009

Touch Of Class (Sequel) Comments

Rating: 5.0

He offers a drink and ogles her ring.
She rings a number, but says not a thing.

He orders champagne to be sent upstairs.
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Fay Slimm
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Very clever writing Fay and what a good response you have had from all the readers. It's something different and a great story. 10 love & hugs Karin

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Bob Gibson 06 November 2009

The case came to court, P.C.Smith in the dock she seems to be wearing a very short frock enticement! the Judge said, no money changed hands! you jumped the gun, that's the law of the land My Lud! says the gent, he said with a frown its true i was caught with my trousers down! this lady informed me, she is a masseuse she mislead me! i feel such a goose The judge in his wisdom, threw out the case kept out of the papers, the gent to save face in the old boys club that night, the judge and the gent drank a toast to justice, and money well spent

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David Harris 06 November 2009

Fay, this is a touch of brilliant class. Top marks and thanks for sharing it with us my friend. Hugs David

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Daniel Kempson 06 November 2009

This is brilliant Fay enjoyed it Daniel 10

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Patti Masterman 06 November 2009

Gosh, I enjoyed this. Once I realized what was afoot, the suspense slowly reeled me in. (smile)

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 06 November 2009

cool poem, its like watching nice movie scene.... the last line is superb

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Tsira Goge 06 November 2009

Very original... You write in a fantastic way, Fay...10..... Tsira

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Carol Gall 06 November 2009

better than i had imginerd lol 10

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Catrina Heart 06 November 2009

fabulous sequel shared here my friend............well done! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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