He touches his hat as he saunters past.
She sits in her furs, a touch of real class.
He brushes a speck from his trousered thigh.
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this is well written but there is no class in selling the goods haha
both are waiting who will do the first move...hmmmm, nice dear...this is nice...
Mmmmm what is Fay up to with this one.... I love the flirting and the upper crust intrigue. Sorry I have to go and look further into this story.....10 love & hugs Karin
Fay, I loved how you lead us up the path, then left us dangling. Will certainly look out for a part two. Top marks and thanks for sharing this my friend. Hugs David
Fay, is it a bird, is it a plane...tune in soon to the next episode...I for one can't wait.Should be good. Leave 'em hanging. You 'West Country Ladies'...I don't know. Good piece of 'erotica'.10/10 Regards, Ian
I like this very cute. The flow was perfect and you did a great job with high society. Very well written.
Ooh that surface veneer feels like it is just about to peel off - those seductive rhyming couplets really pull the reader in. S :)
Strangers in the night exchanging glances with fancies-nice one lets have part two+++++10 regards