Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Touch Of Class Comments

Rating: 5.0

He touches his hat as he saunters past.
She sits in her furs, a touch of real class.

He brushes a speck from his trousered thigh.
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Fay Slimm
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Ken E Hall 16 November 2009

Strangers in the night exchanging glances with fancies-nice one lets have part two+++++10 regards

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Eyan Desir 15 November 2009

this is well written but there is no class in selling the goods haha

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Lady Grace 07 November 2009

both are waiting who will do the first move...hmmmm, nice dear...this is nice...

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Mmmmm what is Fay up to with this one.... I love the flirting and the upper crust intrigue. Sorry I have to go and look further into this story.....10 love & hugs Karin

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David Harris 04 November 2009

Fay, I loved how you lead us up the path, then left us dangling. Will certainly look out for a part two. Top marks and thanks for sharing this my friend. Hugs David

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Ian Bowen 04 November 2009

Fay, is it a bird, is it a plane...tune in soon to the next episode...I for one can't wait.Should be good. Leave 'em hanging. You 'West Country Ladies'...I don't know. Good piece of 'erotica'.10/10 Regards, Ian

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Stacey Watts 04 November 2009

I like this very cute. The flow was perfect and you did a great job with high society. Very well written.

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Susan Jarvis 04 November 2009

Ooh that surface veneer feels like it is just about to peel off - those seductive rhyming couplets really pull the reader in. S :)

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Carol Gall 04 November 2009

oh continued! ! ! good story shaping up here 10

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