Sunday, March 15, 2015

Touch Me..... See Me Comments

Rating: 4.8

Come and hold me tight
With no streak of light
to come close between two
sublime bodies of faith
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Soumita Sarkar
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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 April 2021

A wonderful poem.. fascinating expression! Liked it

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Dr. Antony Theodore 22 February 2021

Come smell me through mind Shallow and depth defined Then wind of plain delight Shall bathe you every night......smelling through the mind.. original expressions dear poetess. tony

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Chinedu Dike 11 January 2020

Amazing eloquence and emotions. A lovely and very passionate write. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 January 2019

A passionate piece beautifully rendered poetically. I came across accidentally. Really some accidents are good in life.

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Dev Anand 16 August 2017

come close between two sublime bodies of faith come and smell me, Come see me with your soul Come feel me with your tongue Come and read mystery in eyes wonderful lines full of love and passion... thank u dear poet. dev

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Queeny Gona 17 May 2017

Very Passionate read!

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Beautiful and touched the heart.Thank you

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 February 2017

Hi Soumita, A poem of passion, love. Definitely a little sensuous. Beautifully rendered. Choice of words, rhyme and rhythm totally in tune with the emotions they are intended to convey. Fantastic write. A full 10+++

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Salman Sayeed 29 July 2016

Beautiful and romantic poem. Thank you mam for sharing

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Kishore Kumar Das 09 May 2016

What a cocktail of sensuality with love........what a brilliance in showing the nexus between romanticism and philosophy.....through your touch I shall see love in your eyes.......full 10 marks to you...

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 April 2016

With no streak of light! Only with the muse of sweet love. Nice piece of work.

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Souren Mondal 08 November 2015

Sensual, romantic, and vivid in it's description... Loved the manner in which this monologue actually appeals to the intended speaker and the final stanza: 'Come and read mystery in eyes That spell magic on beholders And sends rivers of solace down the reeds of lonely gates' - is a really fine ending... Love indeed educates us.., Thank you for sharing :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 September 2015

Hold me tight, Come and smell me with defined depth. delight shall bathe you every night. See me with your soul, cozy nest, caress, ignite. Feel me with your tounge and sense the mystery in my eyes. Oh Saumita, it is passion, it is eros, it is love and it has depth. thank you for this pleasant poem. i like it soo much. tony

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Amitava Sur 03 August 2015

A lovely penning with a romantic feel and intense emotion. Enjoyed your expression.

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Melvina Germain 29 July 2015

This flow of beauty soothes my soul, such an amazing romantic touch leaving heart prints within. I love the magic that trickles so beautifully though this poem...Thank you for sharing Soumita.....

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Jacob Macharia 14 July 2015

Just come...if words can explain it all...great

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Kinyua Karanja 08 July 2015

Wonderful Romantic poem it's among the i have read so far.

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Ramesh Rai 01 July 2015

Come see me with your soul What a fantastic write! Amazing composition and selection of words Beautiful sensual and exhilarating thought developed with your beautiful emotion. Wonderful! Wonderful! Wonderful! Thanks for sharing +10.

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Kelly Kurt 01 April 2015

a very sensual poem. Romantic and deep. Thanks for sharing it.

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Savita Tyagi 21 March 2015

Wonderful poem. enjoyed. Come seek me through my words.....as a reader I will do to venture in your world..... Thanks for sharing.

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