Come and hold me tight
With no streak of light
to come close between two
sublime bodies of faith
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Come smell me through mind Shallow and depth defined Then wind of plain delight Shall bathe you every night......smelling through the mind.. original expressions dear poetess. tony
Amazing eloquence and emotions. A lovely and very passionate write. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
A passionate piece beautifully rendered poetically. I came across accidentally. Really some accidents are good in life.
come close between two sublime bodies of faith come and smell me, Come see me with your soul Come feel me with your tongue Come and read mystery in eyes wonderful lines full of love and passion... thank u dear poet. dev
Hi Soumita, A poem of passion, love. Definitely a little sensuous. Beautifully rendered. Choice of words, rhyme and rhythm totally in tune with the emotions they are intended to convey. Fantastic write. A full 10+++
What a cocktail of sensuality with love........what a brilliance in showing the nexus between romanticism and philosophy.....through your touch I shall see love in your eyes.......full 10 marks to you...
With no streak of light! Only with the muse of sweet love. Nice piece of work.
Sensual, romantic, and vivid in it's description... Loved the manner in which this monologue actually appeals to the intended speaker and the final stanza: 'Come and read mystery in eyes That spell magic on beholders And sends rivers of solace down the reeds of lonely gates' - is a really fine ending... Love indeed educates us.., Thank you for sharing :)
Hold me tight, Come and smell me with defined depth. delight shall bathe you every night. See me with your soul, cozy nest, caress, ignite. Feel me with your tounge and sense the mystery in my eyes. Oh Saumita, it is passion, it is eros, it is love and it has depth. thank you for this pleasant poem. i like it soo much. tony
A lovely penning with a romantic feel and intense emotion. Enjoyed your expression.
This flow of beauty soothes my soul, such an amazing romantic touch leaving heart prints within. I love the magic that trickles so beautifully though this poem...Thank you for sharing Soumita.....
Come see me with your soul What a fantastic write! Amazing composition and selection of words Beautiful sensual and exhilarating thought developed with your beautiful emotion. Wonderful! Wonderful! Wonderful! Thanks for sharing +10.
Wonderful poem. enjoyed. Come seek me through my words.....as a reader I will do to venture in your world..... Thanks for sharing.
A wonderful poem.. fascinating expression! Liked it