Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Monday, April 20, 2009

Touch Me Not Comments

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I feel so shy if you touch,
Never think more or ideas vouch,
Prison I feel as water in pouch,
Neither words nor offer much,
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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K.v. Subbarao 10 October 2009

I feel so shy if you touch, Never think more or ideas vouch, Prison I feel as water in pouch, Neither words nor offer much,

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Sulochna Pandit 09 October 2009

I feel so shy if you touch, Never think more or ideas vouch,

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Maulin Shah 07 October 2009

With first light I open, Leaves fresh and arm widen, Open to embrace but shame laden, Eyes stare but words hidden,

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Shilpa Maheswari 07 October 2009

need a touch smooth and delicate, I shut my eyes if matters complicate,

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Kamli Kamal 07 October 2009

With first light I open, Leaves fresh and arm widen, Open to embrace but shame laden

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Suresh Vakil 02 October 2009

feel so shy if you touch, Never think more or ideas vouch, Prison I feel as water in pouch,

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Ravi Sathasivam 30 August 2009

Sentimental poem. Lovely Well penned Enjoyed reading it

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Argum Sheth 19 August 2009

it is so delicte plant.....10

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Durga Sethani 19 August 2009

female is comared to plant touch me not....10

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Jayant Manik 14 August 2009

it is very sentimental poem and good one too....10

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Kant Shri 14 August 2009

loely poem with good comparision....10

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Ritul Soni 01 August 2009

I need a touch smooth and delicate, I shut my eyes if matters complicate, ...should look from distance...10

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Ratna Patel 01 August 2009

feel so shy if you touch, Never think more or ideas vouch, Prison I feel as water in pouch, Neither words nor offer much, should be seen from distance...10

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Ketan Rajgor 01 August 2009

need a touch smooth and delicate, I shut my eyes if matters complicate, plant hav ing same quality...10

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Pittle Shaileja 28 July 2009

I feel so shy if you touch, Never think more or ideas vouch, Prison I feel as water in pouch, Neither words nor offer much, unqiue quality of plant...10

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Trevor William 27 July 2009

I feel so shy if you touch, Never think more or ideas vouch, Prison I feel as water in pouch, Neither words nor offer much, watch it from distance....10

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Kamlesh Ambalal 27 July 2009

I feel so shy if you touch, Never think more or ideas vouch, Prison I feel as water in pouch, Neither words nor offer much, it reminds us beauty is to see and not to touch....10

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Bharati Bhikhubhai 26 July 2009

I feel so shy if you touch, Never think more or ideas vouch, Prison I feel as water in pouch, Neither words nor offer much, beautiful poem...10

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feel so shy if you touch, Never think more or ideas vouch, Prison I feel as water in pouch, ......... very sensitive plant compare to lady..10

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Sejal Kapadia 22 July 2009

I feel so shy if you touch, Never think more or ideas vouch, Prison I feel as water in pouch, Neither words nor offer much, .. good rhyming and touching poem...10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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