Sunday, July 26, 2020

Touch Me Not Comments

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Touch me not
as I am @ 80 years
sans all
owing now to Covid
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Akhtar Jawad 31 July 2020

when awake finds me missing an empty bed her face now red...An old woman suspects more than an old man.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 July 2020

mmmmmmmmmmmmm , ., ., ., ..no point posting poems no comments get recorded ph is not bothered it seems techy foul could be so read older poetry

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 July 2020

ok no comments so what

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Srijita Mondal 27 July 2020

will you comprehend the surprise she experiences when awake finds me missing an empty bed

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Srijita Mondal 27 July 2020

cold breeze will continue to slap me as if I was like a new born leaf not knowing autumn has come for me now simply flying in thin air like an autumn leaf

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Srijita Mondal 27 July 2020

will I ever see the morning sun again walk about in dew Grass will envelop me wondering would anyone know I am no more

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Valsa George 27 July 2020

Don't fear such things.....! Visualizing death may weaken our mind and body! Now man's life span has increased! Many young people die at a premature age! Many octogenarians live up to a hundred....! So relax, dear friend! I know it's all a poet's fancy.....! Interesting write!

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Mahtab Bangalee 26 July 2020

I won't touch I won't touch the old age I am green Still i am green in time express Time won't touch me With old age I've no amity I dream I dream the time The time of going forever Going forever in green fair Touch me not Touch me not My green age knot Imminent the death pot

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M Asim Nehal 26 July 2020

Inner wish of a poet nicely expressed. Nothing CAN TOUCH A POET" S IMAGINATION AND DREAMS..10+

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Varsha M 26 July 2020

Positive hope revives even dead souls I hope a better tomorrow So it'll be for I see it. Things will be better again

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