Tuesday, April 15, 2014

Touch Me- Dusk Comments

Rating: 5.0

I walk
through the woods
swirling whiteness,
thick blanket of mist;
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Gautami Phookan
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Georgios Venetopoulos 25 April 2014

I am reading it again. The language and syntax used was very intriguing, together with the unfinished element of suspense. Great architecture of words and meanings and all that by our Gautami. :)

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Georgios Venetopoulos 21 April 2014

Very well written etheree; the talent of gautami is for one more time evident. :) G.

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