Touch Me Comments

Rukiah Annuar That is amazing too Hasmukh Amathalal JRNightingale 2011.12.09 18: 51 Quite a moving poem which moves from lost love and regret to a form of hope. Very good. Reply

This poem is powerful, but subtle at the same time. I can relate to this poem very easily. Your word choice makes it easy for pictures to form in my head. Great job!

The feelings woven with such tenderness speak loudly..Great work!

Deletecyclopseven I like the element of straightforwardness in your poetry. It is not easy to write such lines, especially in poetry form...it just comes naturally for you.

Will you touch me in form of wind? Will you spread the light and be kind? Push me with your gentle touch to come in same for again Rush to open fields to experience the rain...... Nice poem written in rhymes......keep up the good work.: -)

Great! This poem directly or completely speaks unto me! ! ! Top marks, , sir! ! !

I hope you will be kind enough The earth had been unkind and rough I have now reason to smile or laugh As you have come back as my better half