Thursday, June 20, 2013

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when we surrender we die.

life lifts outstretched arms and we,
poor adams, uncomprehending
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Melvina Germain 29 October 2015

Is it possible we don't allow ourselves to soar beyond and tap into massive wisdom that awaits us. We know more than we think we know and what holds us back needs to be released, it's within us. Excellent poetry.....

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Heather Wilkins 23 July 2013

a good write. there is no way for us to know

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