Touch Comments

It is Haiku write? Too much to feel although it is short. Keep write..I want to read your fresh. Thanks for sharing....

Keep on writing. I am with you.

i like it, slow, no rush, let the tempo build. good,10

Yes the way of touching should be like that, from slow to fast.10 from me for small good piece.

hmmmmmmmm cant say much maybe Im in agreement with wat Sulaiman says.

great write in short, and very seducive too............A+