Thursday, October 8, 2009

''Touch'' Comments

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One night I saw a dream....
I was standing in house of fire....
and I scream.....
Someone came and asked me....
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C. P. Sharma 11 October 2009

Intelligent expression. A touch of desire Burns deeper than fire. There is balm for burns, Lusty desire has no u turn. CP

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Catrina Heart 08 October 2009

well expressed piece...........a touch is much hotter than a fire! Great.......

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smart poem, , well said...

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