Thursday, October 2, 2008

Total Trust.....Lost Comments

Rating: 5.0

This is the story of the total trust
You gave me and I lost
I was a bad thing
I never used to think
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Rudy Hossam
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Sarah Abdullah 28 January 2009

Loved it.... Really Good one... Well done..

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Holly Hayden 28 January 2009

i like this one very good

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Danni Scott 21 January 2009

this is really well written, i cant help but think of a train whiltst reading it and I don't know why.

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XxBrokenHeartedCupidxX ! ! 31 December 2008

i like this poem very much because its about someone earning trust and then losing it.

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Reshma Ramesh 10 November 2008

well penned.........

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Tia Maria 02 October 2008

Once was lost but now am found was blind but now I see... I liked this poem very very much - just a gentle reminder which we all need..... and for all the lost souls out there :)

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Rudy Hossam

Rudy Hossam

Maryland (U.S.A)
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