Monday, May 5, 2025

Total Loneliness Comments

Rating: 5.0

Outside,
Life's cold wind
Blows,
Inside,
...
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Sandra Feldman
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Rebecca Navarre 14 May 2025

Love the way you've worded/written this! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 14 May 2025

And still Nobody knows The answer... As so many hearts have questioned, why.......

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Rebecca Navarre 14 May 2025

So deeply heart moving and so beautifully expressed! ..

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Rob Lamberton 06 May 2025

I like the slim structure of your poem and the words that stand by themselves are really not so alone.

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I can feel and see the utter loneliness depicted in this poignant yet beautiful poem. It pinches the heart and makes one cry. So moving and heartfelt. To my treasures.

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