Total Life Brings Total Death Comments

All the thirst of life is gone, Only a shadow of former life, A shadow of floating dream, A shadow of Love and beauty left

The dream to live with totality, The dream to die with peaceful easy; all are now a tiresome fantasy....//

The dream to live with totality, The dream to die with peaceful easy; all are now a tiresome fantasy.

The song that is heard at the end of the day is inaudible, Only the dismal pain of uncanny feeling is felt, Mind is lost in mindless shape, Song of life is utterly tuneless

Unfruitful is the way to live, The fruitless tree of lifeless vigour, The wafting waves of Joy, ////

Life is a preparation of death, A deep and supreme preparation, Only a life of depth is apt to die, A tiresome life is unable to die

All the thirst of life is gone, Only a shadow of former life, A shadow of floating dream, A shadow of Love and beauty left.//

The song that is heard at the end of the day is inaudible, Only the dismal pain of uncanny feeling is felt, Mind is lost in mindless shape, Song of life is utterly tuneless.

All the thirst of life is gone, Only a shadow of former life, A shadow of floating dream, A shadow of Love and beauty left...///

Death brings peace and perfection, Only death is perfect as ego is no more, With death ego becomes a sage, A total life can become a total death

Life is a preparation of death, A deep and supreme preparation, Only a life of depth is apt to die, A tiresome life is unable to die.

Unfruitful is the way to live, The fruitless tree of lifeless vigour, The wafting waves of Joy, The dream to live with totality, The dream to die with peaceful easy; all are now a tiresome fantasy.

All the thirst of life is gone, Only a shadow of former life, A shadow of floating dream, A shadow of Love and beauty left.

A well composed superior poem. Simply excellent....10+++

''Song of life is utterly tuneless....'' A nice expression! Well crafted the crisis of the present life.... Thank you for the poem being shared with us. Stay safe, my dear friend. PC