Total Darkness Comments

An excellent poem. Ron

Very deep persian..........the emotion burns through the page...10 best wishes Jon

A poignant and touching poem, perfect metaphors! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

Very nice poems, my nightingale! Bravo! Your rose.

Excellent writing, a poem packed full of feelings, well done,10 Lynda xx

Be not afraid of darkness, my friend. Even if it is total night. This only adds nobleness and fantastic sounds to a voice of a nightingale........10.... Tsira

i had visions in my head while i was reading this.... very good piece.

A deeply sad poem whose beauty touches the emotions felt through your lines. 10