Sunday, January 22, 2006

Tossin' That Coin Comments

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If I toss a coin into the air
To determine my future action,
The result of which I should beware,
For it may not bring satisfaction.
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Jonathan Goldman a.k.a JGthepoet
courage january
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Gina Onyemaechi 22 January 2006

I like the first 2 verses, Jonathan. As for the other 3, I feel they could be enhanced with rhyme (as in the first 2) and more metaphorical language. Regards, Gina.

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Jonathan Goldman a.k.a JGthepoet

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