Tuesday, August 25, 2009

# Toss - 3 Liner Comments

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Louis Rams 13 September 2009

GOD held the coin, because it was and always will be his decision to make. a ten

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Joseph Poewhit 07 September 2009

The sun stood still one day

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 07 September 2009

Great philosophy of the future of life or the hereafter.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 30 August 2009

hehehe hats off to you! great tolstoy which depicted in the 'war and peace' you said in just 3 lines! 101010101010+

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Marieta Maglas 30 August 2009

Sometimes it is difficult to understand God's will, or maybe He gives us the permission to decide for ourselves.Great poem......................10+++++++

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Miriam Maia Padua 28 August 2009

you really have great and fruitful thoughts so unique.. this is great..I am touched by this... makes me ponder on life...on my life thanks for sharing 10+++ Lovelots, Maia

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~ Jon London ~ 28 August 2009

Who knows what destiny lay ahead...only the greatness from above shall carry us......Your faith shines through in this Sam...well penned

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C. P. Sharma 26 August 2009

Either way you are a winner, your offering has been accepted. CP

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Deepti Agarwal 26 August 2009

It ws good that God held it up.. coz our future cannot be decided by a coin... :) its something which will happen the way it is supposed to happen :)

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Rajaram Ramachandran 25 August 2009

This shows that God, not the coin, is the judge to decide our future based on our day to day performances.

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Carol Gall 25 August 2009

excellence in this one 10

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Rakesh Bedi 25 August 2009

Something unique; a class in itself, sam!

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Sandra Martyres 25 August 2009

This one is brilliant Samanyan.....a well composed Senryu poem.10

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Catrina Heart 25 August 2009

What a dazzling creative mind you have Sam..................10/10

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