Sunday, June 2, 2013

Tortured Soul Cain Comments

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Here is the tortured soul, that the earth feeds
devouring her plains, fields, weeds, and her sycamore trees.
spreading knowledge through her lands, here and there gathering his lambs.
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Jordan Couso
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Gajanan Mishra 02 June 2013

very very beautiful poem, thanks, my dear poet, go on writing, I want to read more and more. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Paige Welch 02 June 2013

My goodness, you are very good at describing the pain and torture the first murderer felt and how that feeling has spread from the soul to the world and humanity.

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