Monday, June 19, 2017

Tortured Love Comments

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Drawn to determination, set forth to bring redemption to oneself. Anger and prosecution is sealed to an everyday fate, that's built to bring down the soul.
Words given causes cries in the night, the sounds so disturbing it causes even the darkest beast to yeald.
Who shall bring such pain & turmoil but the bringer of death himself, damned by the devil and casted out by God.
Shunned with torture he leers in the shadows sinking his rotting soul upon hers. The heart beats become hallow as he drains her memories, love, dreams, until all she feels is emptiness. He watches without feelings as if shes his prey, eyes steadily following her every move.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 June 2017

A marvellous poem on Tortured Love. Nice presentation. Heartfelt one. The last stanza is most attractive. Many thanks dear Miiya, keep the ball rolling...10

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