Saturday, June 20, 2009

Tortured Hearts Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tortured hearts - with Love so fleeting,
Wonder why my heart keeps beating;
I never wondered that before,
I never wondered,
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david lessard
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~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ 20 June 2009

Ive been in that dark place. I'ts painful and lonely I agree to dp your hardest not 2 go. This waz a brilliantly written poem Id give it a 12 if I could, but ill have to settle for a 10 Nice work

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david lessard

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gardner, massachusetts
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