Torture Comments
I sit at the edge of this lake,
looking out into the calm water,
separating alternate dimensions.
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This poem shows strong emotion. I liked it. Sorry (for your pain) if this poem has truth to the content. Love can hurt if its not strait from/for God. When directed at/for people there will be torture. You captured that in your poem, well done. If you get a chance review/read some of mine. Keith
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8/17/2025 9:19:28 AM # 1.0.0
strong words. i like your details and ur emotion. love it<3 <3 u know who!