Tuesday, March 13, 2007

Tornado Season Comments

Rating: 5.0

the siren sounds and the world turns to dust
the trees spin about like little brown tops
while all the leaves run frantically away
and the people yell, hide, hide, hide
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Ben Partenay
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Sandra Fowler 13 March 2007

Very expressive, written in your own unique style. You are indeed a poet worthy of the name. Kindest regards, Sandra

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