Wednesday, June 11, 2008

Tornado In Central New York Comments

Rating: 5.0

"Look over there! Across the lake! "

White cap dust clouds
And bellowing wind
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David DeSantis
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Christine Austin Cole 27 July 2008

I'm close enough to NY that I get there on occasion and as a sometimes visitor/observer, I beg to differ - there are tornados in NY, I think... they are, though, of the human sort. Actually.... I think I may have been one myself a few years back (don't ask) . : P It's quite a thing to ponder though... watching a funnel cloud roll into New York. Geesh... yeh... that would be something. You've painted an image in my mind that is nothing short of alarming. Christine

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Julie Neises 11 July 2008

I live in Kansas and have seen tornadoes all my life. I've been to New York, and to see a tornado there would be very strange indeed. Great description!

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Rema Prasanna 25 June 2008

A powerful tornado swirls across after Roman Bath in Central New York, Exceptional David, scripted well and you created a bizarre storm...... 10 for this Rgs Rema

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Jurietta Duraan 18 June 2008

very powerful description of so much more than a tornado! ! ! Good work as always David... another bit of proof that you can write about anthing.

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Sandra Fowler 17 June 2008

Beautifully written, David. I love the reference to Dorothy and Kansas. Ten from me. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Flora Gillingham 16 June 2008

Wonderfully observed. Compelling picture of powerlessness in the face of nature. fx

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Raveendran . 12 June 2008

Watching from an armchair, in the mini screen it is beautiful, that deadly funnel

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Lynda Robson 11 June 2008

A lot of people dismiss global warming, but our planet is always changing regardless of whether man has contributed to it, a very well written topical piece David, 10 Lynda xx

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Nik Morgan 11 June 2008

A very thought provoking poem with a very real message Thanks Ivor

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Rani Turton 11 June 2008

The last paragraph says it all. David, strange days a-coming! All the best to you.

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