Monday, July 20, 2009

Tornado Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sky has become a swamp cooler
over this swampy town.
Thunder rocks the roof
and lightning lights the sky!
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jeremiah shine
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Sarwar Chowdhury 22 July 2009

fine thoughts, fine looked at the fact, finely penned..10+

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Ency Bearis 21 July 2009

a wonderful imagery write and effects well implied...nice poem....10

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