Tornado Poem by Rob Lamberton

Tornado

Rating: 5.0


Surge of wind circles
Indiscriminate harvest
Wake of destruction
Who knows what it will pick up
What will it fling back to earth

Non-creative work
Only their is new life sucked
From the ground after

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
On July 25,2024 I changed the first line from " Mental surge of wind." And I changed the second to last line from, "Except for the new life sucked."
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 July 2024

The fury of tornado is vividly depicted in this brilliantly crafted poem. Great imagery!

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Anjandev Roy 27 February 2024

Significant piece..... thank u....Rob......

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