Monday, July 18, 2011

Tornado Comments

Rating: 5.0

It hits, though for few moments
It reminds the devastating penchent
Of the nature while in it's full rage
Within seconds nothing can be salvaged
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Ratnakar Mandlik
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Richard D Remler 29 April 2019

We had one hit town a few years ago. It skipped across the countryside hitting whatever it wanted to, and completely missing other things. Was a busy day. A striking, very descriptive penning of nature having a field day. Good imagery. Well penned of course. tfs

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 April 2016

Devastating! ! With the powers of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Hazel Durham 01 April 2016

I love this great write full of wisdom, that what goes around comes around, superb write!

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Bharati Nayak 20 January 2016

The nature through you try to teach It's children that they should behave Like tidesof oceanin limits to live No grudge, no ill will they should preach Else they too could be hit by Tornado- - - Nature's destructive fury can bring down any pride that go beyond limit.

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Ratnakar Mandlik

Ratnakar Mandlik

Hyderabad(A.P.) , India
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