Wednesday, February 15, 2012

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For a special lady
who's life was shady

Brought us so much joy
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Beth Johnson
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 18 February 2012

The title you chose for this poem wraps it all up as a tribute to a famous person who had it all but lost it. It's an excellent style and I use it often - gets the readers to ask why that title? And as they read though the poem they get the message. Makes them think.

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