Friday, August 31, 2007

Torn Ripped This Tattered Cloth (Write The Queen Of Pain) Comments

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Unveil it not
I ask
the mask
is so tattered
...
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Uloia Norris Moore
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Peter Stavropoulos 31 August 2007

Excellent poem from the heart. Some great lines here. Help the young ones and help the old ones. The young ones need our help and experience to believe.

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x... x... 31 August 2007

Yes, as long as we can JUST BELIEVE, as you state in this great write, than there is hope and reason to go on.....the young one's keep us young and that is the greatest gift of all. Thanks for this. marci.xo ~~

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