Sunday, July 27, 2008

Torn Heart Comments

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As I think of you here,
remembering such times of joy,
as you held my hand,
kissing me ever so tenderly,
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Javier Falcon
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I agree with May May, you are VERY good at using your emotions at all the right places.... ..your one of my fav. poets :)

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May Namoc 27 July 2008

'leaving me heartless, frozen in this room'...ouch. aww, javi. it's really good and really sad. You express your emotions well in your poems. You incorporate vivid feelings that leave me eaither rly happy or depressed. lol. but it's rly good. wonderful poem from a wonderful poet! <3

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Javier Falcon

Javier Falcon

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