Torn between two lives,
the one I have
and the one I want.
The one that I live
...
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My friend the life you have, you touch so many people with your kindness and wisdom... we are all richer for the life you have.. Andy 10
Hi David. Lovely piece of poetry. I think we all feel like this at some stage. Enjoyed it alot.
This is a fine poem David - one of your best. It has just the right balance between the thoughtful content and the well scripted structure. I guess writing poetry allows you to 'have your cake and eat it', eh? Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥