Thursday, October 12, 2017

Torn Between The Two Comments

Rating: 5.0

You make it so hard for me to choose because there's you and then there's him how the hell do you decide between two beautiful people with a heart so big.

My head throbs my heart hurts my hands tremble my body aches what am I supposed to do I've never had to do it before...I've never been more afraid in my life.
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hazel jackson
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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 October 2017

Such a very lovely poem, Hazel... Reminds me of the song TORN BETWEEN TWO LOVERS popularized by MARY MAC GREGOR... a perfect 10+++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2017

Getting aches, throbs, trembling and getting hurt are sings of depression and anxiety. These provoke thought and affect decision making process. You try to hide these and you try to explore new ideas. Amazing and brilliant poem is shared.10

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