Friday, October 13, 2006

Torn Asunder Comments

Rating: 4.5

To say to her 'I love you' one day.
I think of what she might say.
To hold her so close, so near;
gently whispered in her ear.
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Joshua Fegley
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Elizabeth Sheaffer 31 December 2006

I second Hazel. Very well-written. So moving...

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