Wednesday, October 15, 2008

Torn Apart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Many a year ago, there was one
And that one grew to few
And that few to many
And that many became one
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Julius Victorio
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Mikayla Carpenter 19 June 2009

This poem is very wonderful: ] Keeps me wondering. Very nicely written. Let me know when you write more.

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That's quite a portrayal of how society works.Anyone innovative is ostrasized and anyone rebellious succeeds in taking over or are killed.If you get a chance please read my poem and rate it.It's called the Bugs Of Nature's Economic Picture and it's about social -economic strata.Welcome to PoemHunter and I accept your hand of friendship.If you have problems with spelling.puctuation and definitions or anything else that has to do with words you can get your answers on the internet just type the word in the search bar..And I find Wikipedia to be very helpful.A ten from me and my best wishes.

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N.I.C.E! Good one Julius! Keep up the great work!

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Sherice Malcolm 15 October 2008

Oh wow this is amazing Jul Great Poem!

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