Monday, November 24, 2008

Torn Apart Comments

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Have so much of love to give I suffocate myself
A tender most affection but I so dare not touch
Wishing for the jar and put me upon a dusty shelf
Nothing rings true when confusion hurts so much
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Vision Ghost
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I love how you said its a lonely place but the best location it seems to be.. So true i like this poem you wrote it very well.. Krista

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