Wednesday, October 26, 2022

Torn Apart Comments

Rating: 5.0

What was then I long for now,
Yearning for those precious years,
Facing many hopes and fears,
Worry marks my weary brow.
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Parting is really painful. Poignant poem.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 26 October 2022

Ditto for me Jayne Excellent poem

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 October 2022

A wonderful poem... thanks for sharing. Top score

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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